waken up
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i Wake up in the morning feeling down but life is all around i breath deep trying to find the courage not to go back to sleep i face the world when i feel like i want to weep lifes hitting harder every day its a hard place to be but time make me stronger ever second of the week trying to make it out of these sheets but life is move way to fast i find my self thinking about the past but it wont last so ill keep move forward trying to make it ....to the door to explore i try to be free to truly see the vast sea stuck in thought rolling thru my head just trying to roll out of bed
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i Wake up in the morning feeling down but life is all around i breath deep trying to find the courage not to go back to sleep i face the world when i feel like i want to weep lifes hitting harder every day its a hard place to be but time make me stronger ever second of the week trying to make it out of these sheets but life is move way to fast i find my self thinking about the past but it wont last so ill keep move forward trying to make it ....to the door to explore i try to be free to truly see the vast sea stuck in thought rolling thru my head just trying to roll out of bed
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