shine

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Ayo, I’m too fly, I should be where the cloud at, Only good vibes, You should try that, I got a good view, The ocean clear from up here I can see through, That’s why the sky's blue, So let the sunshine, We watch the sunset, Another summer night, The moon light is next, Yeah, I’m so amazed when I star gaze, Look, If they could talk I wonder what they say, huh I guess I’m caught up in the moment, As time fly, the sun rise Before you know it, You only live once you gotta enjoy it, After the summer leave, Then it’s autumn leaves, look, Before you know it, it’s December, So let it snow, It’s the time for the winter, They say April showers Bring May flowers, Well I’m a give ‘em to my summer When it’s time for her, Them good vibes

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MidSkiz

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @lil_jecca, It's time for us to take a look at 'shine'! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bo Jangles

4 years ago

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T.blaze 🎶🎙

4 years ago

Good shittt look up #mercy5

The 1 one

19 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Drastik7

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥