Yo @21BANDZ!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Liquor store flow'! π₯
Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little.
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨
Delivery and flows seem effortless for you, you're clearly a master of this. π You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! π
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects.
Great hype portrayed in this track, can really feel the energy! π₯΅
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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jus take the L if you scared jus say so
this mf said he sent 6 days ago and THAT was 4 days ago but you drop this 8 days ago???? wtf
thought ya son got hit by a car? how you out here promoting tracks but you can't respond to a battle you agreed too? AND YO SON GOT HIT BY A CAR???
why you duckin my cousin homie?
yo I sent you that battle 6 days ago you drop this 4 days ago where you at
Yo @21BANDZ! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Liquor store flow'! π₯ Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Delivery and flows seem effortless for you, you're clearly a master of this. π You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! π We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Great hype portrayed in this track, can really feel the energy! π₯΅ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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