Mans World

Mans World

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#OURCREW military daddy from school of da hardknocks alligator shoes with the matching lacoste socks its a mans world yep its a man world u cant tell no man to man up if u cant piss, while u stand up got cho hand up ready to answer nobody question DeEalla grandson im a precious n I be damned if they opress us lotta on my chest bra talkn reckless leave em redrum on Allah Im a legend let these chirpn twerkn chickns get me i be dead wrong Im a king witta crown on my head dog cause im blessed yall long as im blessed, then im gon bless yall Kobe won 5 but they love AI corn rolls got these men about the house so now them boyz spoiled raised by my momma thats y Grimm Lock I rock rose gold

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Hey @lock36, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Mans World'! 💥 Your bars are real wild on this one, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌You wove everything together with an impeccable rhyme scheme and cadence, made your voice work for you---def peep! We're digging your flow on this one, the skill and confidence is clear but also standing on your principles. Very respectable. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. The sample works wonders for this track and helps your message to stand out keeping the audience engaged! 🎼 "You can't tell a man to man up if you can't piss while you stand up" Line is crazy bro! Wow your entire message and concept of this track a lot of people not gonna understand. TOO DOPE! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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