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Hey @DezalonPhillipMann,
We appreciate you sharing 'S/O to my jeweler(Dez Deniro)' with us! 💥
Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix!
You got great bars here. 🙌 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you!
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠
The beat works perfectly with your voice!! 🧨
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance.
The energy is real on this one, jheeez! 🥵
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @DezalonPhillipMann, We appreciate you sharing 'S/O to my jeweler(Dez Deniro)' with us! 💥 Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! You got great bars here. 🙌 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 The beat works perfectly with your voice!! 🧨 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. The energy is real on this one, jheeez! 🥵 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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