Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @cameronmcdavis! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Og First track B4 I Became famous'! 💥 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

cameron mcdavis

2 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene