Hi @jghost826!
Welcome to our feedback of 'First day out ๐ฅ๐ฅ'! ๐ฅ
We like the bars, well written! We like the rhyming, it's tight. โจ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐
Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ
Yo those money rolls go crazy on the cover art bro. This is a really dope song and you chose some really dope art to represent it.
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
you need to work on your creative word play when your you're throwing out your bars and I feel like the quality was not the greatest try to tune your vocals up to the be other than that my brother keep pushing for your dream and I hope to see you stop in
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ
Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Hard to hear ya vocals. But your flow is NASTYYYYY Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I can barely hear u Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
This dope fucks with the vibes great beat choice and flow is clean ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฏ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Canโt hear nun u sayin my boy But shit cool tho Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Shit ๐ฅ thats ๐ฏ turn yo vocals UP just a little bit Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
This joint smack ๐๐๐พ๐ถ๐ฅ #THooks Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Cool Delivery. Are you using specific equipment? Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Keep yo foot on they neck bro donโt stop grinding Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐ฅ flow switches nice af Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
The structure on this joint is on point from chorus to bars keep it coming fam Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Turn your voice up more I canโt hear it Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
this a whole vibe I would turn the vocals up ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Hi @jghost826! Welcome to our feedback of 'First day out ๐ฅ๐ฅ'! ๐ฅ We like the bars, well written! We like the rhyming, it's tight. โจ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐ Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ Yo those money rolls go crazy on the cover art bro. This is a really dope song and you chose some really dope art to represent it. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
you need to work on your creative word play when your you're throwing out your bars and I feel like the quality was not the greatest try to tune your vocals up to the be other than that my brother keep pushing for your dream and I hope to see you stop in Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
G.O.A.T. ๐ Money ๐ธ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ