Hi @jghost826!
Welcome to our feedback of 'First day out 🔥🔥'! 💥
We like the bars, well written! We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
Yo those money rolls go crazy on the cover art bro. This is a really dope song and you chose some really dope art to represent it.
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
you need to work on your creative word play when your you're throwing out your bars and I feel like the quality was not the greatest try to tune your vocals up to the be other than that my brother keep pushing for your dream and I hope to see you stop in
Bars: Dope 🔥
Delivery: Dope 🔥
Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hard to hear ya vocals. But your flow is NASTYYYYY Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Perfect 💯
I feel it🔥 try to dig into mastering a little more! Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Dope 🔥
I can barely hear u Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
This dope fucks with the vibes great beat choice and flow is clean 🔥🔥💯 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Can’t hear nun u sayin my boy But shit cool tho Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Shit 🔥 thats 💯 turn yo vocals UP just a little bit Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
This joint smack 😆🙌🏾🎶💥 #THooks Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Cool Delivery. Are you using specific equipment? Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Keep yo foot on they neck bro don’t stop grinding Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
🔥 flow switches nice af Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
The structure on this joint is on point from chorus to bars keep it coming fam Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Turn your voice up more I can’t hear it Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
this a whole vibe I would turn the vocals up 🔥🔥🔥
Hi @jghost826! Welcome to our feedback of 'First day out 🔥🔥'! 💥 We like the bars, well written! We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Yo those money rolls go crazy on the cover art bro. This is a really dope song and you chose some really dope art to represent it. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
you need to work on your creative word play when your you're throwing out your bars and I feel like the quality was not the greatest try to tune your vocals up to the be other than that my brother keep pushing for your dream and I hope to see you stop in Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥