Hey @vsex_4d_people,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'The King Had a Dream '! ๐ฅ
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ
Yo man you bounce on this is steady. Loving the album art! You definitely have a vibe that you need to get out to the world.
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All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @vsex_4d_people, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'The King Had a Dream '! ๐ฅ Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ Yo man you bounce on this is steady. Loving the album art! You definitely have a vibe that you need to get out to the world. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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