sweff
Dzii75 Plays
β’28 Apr 2022
dzii were l hai lpg roff Yee yeeyeyeye underdog Roff Me n gang caming busting through the Ruf underdog wulf baking at the moon me n my gang come spining guns every noon fruumu fruumu man udamp full of shit man l thought we may wark it through n out spreying juice party every night yee life is lit haaa full of light so l may let it glow she be right haa we be talking lot how to stike haa blood trip is how we no how survive shi
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Hey @dzii2004! Thanks for sharing 'sweff' with us! π₯ Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! πΌ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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