Yo @swiffuno!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'back and forth'! ๐ฅ
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
This beat is working well for you! ๐ผ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
really nice music I love the way that you did this great delivery nice energy the rhyme scheme hit on point very good structures never stop doing you bro hope to see you show me some love as well
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Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Yo @swiffuno! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'back and forth'! ๐ฅ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ This beat is working well for you! ๐ผ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
really nice music I love the way that you did this great delivery nice energy the rhyme scheme hit on point very good structures never stop doing you bro hope to see you show me some love as well Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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