Hush (22:21)
I put my life on standby I was winning by a landslide You ever seen a beat get eaten By a man live? damn You tune in to my IG, I'll show you why I can't lie, Baddies in my DM, ill see em in rhe pm I want em, that's a damn lie. I fly solo came in the world dolo Labels beating on my door, They asking me for promo. i twll wm im on solo Look I been a boss, I'm shooting my shot with Kim while Ye stay wildin', Paparazzi getting off shots, That's paid timing. I'm a diamond in da ruff, Iโon dine em Iโon cuff em, Splash em in they face, Kelly Rowland with the cup when the doors open up, We don't speak, keep it hush. When the doors open up, We donโt speak, hush
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @bigsam412, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Hush (22:21)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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