Hey @kingkold,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'bon and clyxeTrack 1', here are our thoughts π₯
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Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Good job with the audio quality, this sound clean. β
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @kingkold, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'bon and clyxeTrack 1', here are our thoughts π₯ Unreal lyrics, really nicely written! β¨ Your rhyming is tight. β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Good job with the audio quality, this sound clean. β With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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