Crown of Thorns
Aaron Jamal Harrington95 Plays
•25 Apr 2022
Aye yoo!! Just want to take moment to thank @rapfame_ar_team for their support, patience, and grace with me learning how to record and master on my own. I’m not there yet but hopefully y’all see the growth and maturity. Thank y’all for believing in me #idoitforyall 🤜
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @aaron_jamal, We're gonna review your track 'Crown of Thorns'. Let's get it! There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 🧨 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. The effects here don't really work with this track, try play around with others for a better fit. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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