Hey @virbius,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Gallows'! π₯
Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you.
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
This beat is working well for you! πΌ
Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @virbius, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Gallows'! π₯ Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. This beat is working well for you! πΌ Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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