Hey @dre719,
We appreciate you sharing 'CHERISH LIFE' with us! 💥
The mix is just a lil' vocal heavy. Bring the vocals down a bit and it'll sit much better in the mix.
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat selection is on point, good job. 🧨
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
We feel the heartbreak in this track, we respect how much you put yourself out there.💜
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @dre719, We appreciate you sharing 'CHERISH LIFE' with us! 💥 The mix is just a lil' vocal heavy. Bring the vocals down a bit and it'll sit much better in the mix. Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat selection is on point, good job. 🧨 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. We feel the heartbreak in this track, we respect how much you put yourself out there.💜 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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