556

Ariyana

Author

4 years ago

yeah 556 we going to hit a lick me and my brother at the citgo and we spraying that ak 47 we gone spray every day until we found out how we gone go home in this war yeah but I'm going to survive in this war because i got my brother and we sticking together no matter what we going through we is going to be alright and we gone survive this war yeah yeah we gone survive this war with these opps around the block we gone shoot these opps me and my brother spraying on the block and we ain't gone stop until the war stops and when we kill the opps on are block we can go home when this war stops yeah they gone go down on the ground they are defeated it's over for them repeat after me they are defeated it's over for them.

Chaunciti

4 years ago

nice just make clear Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Good 💛

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @melissameadows, It's time for us to take a look at '556'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎