Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @woneted! Welcome to our feedback of 'story pt 1'! 💥 Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Kayden

2 years ago

this rap is based on a true story