Hey @eyxidphwxf,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Taking shots (21:33:59)', here are our thoughts π₯
The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat.
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @eyxidphwxf, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Taking shots (21:33:59)', here are our thoughts π₯ The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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