Yo @fwsj,
It's time for us to take a look at 'LOOK AT DAT DERE NEW'! π₯
Look at dat dere!!
We love the rhyming, it's tight AF. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Great delivery, your voice adds so much rhythm and bounce to the track! Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π
The adlibs are a lil loud on this one tho! Try turning them down and maybe adding some effects to find the perfect balance!
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
Yess, liking your recording quality here, very clear. β
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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#FrankWhiteSlimJones - Look at Dat Dere Prod by J Bass
Yo @fwsj, It's time for us to take a look at 'LOOK AT DAT DERE NEW'! π₯ Look at dat dere!! We love the rhyming, it's tight AF. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Great delivery, your voice adds so much rhythm and bounce to the track! Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π The adlibs are a lil loud on this one tho! Try turning them down and maybe adding some effects to find the perfect balance! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Yess, liking your recording quality here, very clear. β A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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