Hey @jaymoney_10,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Mission'! ๐ฅ
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @jaymoney_10, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Mission'! ๐ฅ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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