Wassup @young_explosion,
Thank you for sharing 'Home Sick' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @young_explosion, Thank you for sharing 'Home Sick' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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