Intensive Care Unit
A very personal song that I wrote about my experience in the hospital with my wife, while my son and Dad were both in intensive care.
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Hey @russill, We appreciate you sharing 'Intensive Care Unit' with us! ๐ฅ Damn this one is personal, we can feel the pain in your bars, turning your hardship into art is a real talent! โค๏ธ The bars are truly special and meaningful on this one! ๐ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. โจ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. ๐ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐ Try switching up the flow to really take this song from the Moon to outer space! ๐ The beat is amazing, perfect choice for you. ๐ผ Recording sounds great, keep up what you're doing, defo adds a lot to this track! โ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. ๐ค All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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