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Hey @jaylenbolton, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'A Lonley Heart'! 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. The rhyming is well put together. ✨ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 You picked the perfect beat for this one, this sounds great. 🧨 Think you could dial back the effects a little. Sometimes less is more. We're definitely feeling the emotion on this one, it's a real sombre and melancholy track that sounds like it came from the heart. It's a shame there's some technical issues with the mix and FX, we'd love to hear a cleaned up version of this at some point! You know how to create a vibe for real. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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