What's up @411a1aabil,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Something like (17:01:13)'! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track?
We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
What's up @411a1aabil, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Something like (17:01:13)'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
thank you