Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @shawnthiers! Thanks for sharing 'staying but tripen' with us! 💥 The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bullet_sea

2 years ago

i got beat, don't use my feet, fallen over nees taking a shot from bees forever and ever to life beyond taking shot of fame not call me lame Because I lay by your say tie to fly soaring thru the sky don't tell a lie makeing time time goes by singing labays tie to your side forever and ever.