Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @jasonbalfe! Welcome to our feedback of 'hope I make it '! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. 🧠 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Your bars are on the beat every time! You just don't miss! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jason Balfe

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.