Wassup @abills,
Thank you for sharing 'Lonely' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ
Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track?
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Wassup @abills, Thank you for sharing 'Lonely' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐ We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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