Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @lilsky225566, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'I'm sad'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lil sky

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.