Hey @rayan.6974633,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Diss Daren'! 💥
Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶
Recording quality is really good on this. Voice and flow on this is great as well. Keep going fam! You really got something good here!
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @rayan.6974633, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Diss Daren'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Recording quality is really good on this. Voice and flow on this is great as well. Keep going fam! You really got something good here! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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