Hey @fashionista,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Chanel (original)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
You got great bars here. ๐ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. ๐
Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes.
Dope track mane! The delivery could be a bit more exciting but that's also subjective. Would say add some ad libs to add some character to the track if possible.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Fire track๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅPerfect ๐ฏ Perfect ๐ฏKeep grinding โ๐พ๐ซกHard work & Dedication โ๐พ โ๐พRespect ๐ค๐พ๐ค๐พ๐ฏ๐ซกGrace & Peace ๐๐พ ๐๐พ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Smooth ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
banger ๐ฅ can u hit like button plz Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
dope bars impression try to work on your delivery but dope track #RTWave Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ฅ๐ค๐ฝ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ #lifedontsuck ๐ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @fashionista, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Chanel (original)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ You got great bars here. ๐ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. ๐ Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. Dope track mane! The delivery could be a bit more exciting but that's also subjective. Would say add some ad libs to add some character to the track if possible. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
dope flow peep #beast9
Let's GOOO ๐ฟ ISSA MOVIE ๐ฅ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Letโs GOOO ๐ฟ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ