Traveling
digme1 foot in front of the other I try to stay on my mission No time to concentrate On the hate these people giving I try to keep up my focus And try to make good decisions But then here come the devil Tryna knock me off my mission Cause I done been through hard times But found a way to make it And If it won’t for God’s grace Probably wouldn’t have made it Opportunity been knocking Tryna see if imma take it Now it’s my time to show and prove Stop with all that faking And I seen how I been wasting And nah man I ain’t waiting These cowards out talk down on me Really trying try my patience I know if lose my cool I be locked in in a cell gazing Wondering what, I did was worth the time I wasted I learned that the only thing that’s blocking me is my mind And all of these stresses But I learned to overcame them all by Counting all of my blessings no weapons formed against me shall prosper so I keep stepping And tho I know that God with me But I’m still keep’n my weapons
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Hey @digme, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Traveling'! 💥 We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recording is solid, everything is clear. ✔ Still try to work on the mix my dude! You def got the talent; just wanna make sure we make it out when you lace the beat! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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