Yo @shamusbland!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Heart On My Sleeve (16:24:42)'! π₯
Good bars here, defo works here! π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π
The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @shamusbland! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Heart On My Sleeve (16:24:42)'! π₯ Good bars here, defo works here! π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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