jam_2022
jam_2022

My City

My City

20 Plays

28 Mar 2022

Verse 1: Yeah its been a long ride yeah its been rough i keep my eyes out for what made up idont pwanna rush i dont wanna run yeah it seems misty But Shoutout to my city yeah when it gets gritty i just dont know, I thank God that i had a susbantial home even when i felt alone its where I came from Hook I mean how can a boy go through so much rejection feels like a in injection to my soul all those opps and those haters just need to wake up in a in their own roles Chorus: I mean give me a break you see where im from you you see what i want you see what ive done just give me a call oh no you say you dont need me at all you want me to fall but you’re wrong oh oh oh bout me your wrong oh oh about it all

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2 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

2 years ago

Hi @jam_2022! Welcome to our feedback of 'My City '! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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