heathen
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where to start where to begin every day i know that i sin Open eyes but all i see is darkness Where's your god, will he forgive. Trust in God, Do you need a reason Wide awake, I struggle with my de-mons Cant decide, The devil calls it treason Am I heaven bound, no i am a heathen
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where to start where to begin every day i know that i sin Open eyes but all i see is darkness Where's your god, will he forgive. Trust in God, Do you need a reason Wide awake, I struggle with my de-mons Cant decide, The devil calls it treason Am I heaven bound, no i am a heathen
Hey @ttvbytheway, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'heathen'! ๐ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! ๐ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
I ain't gon lie this ahit snapped Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
need more lyrics and could have a better catch but not bad just not a hit song . Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Good ๐
great consistency and wordplay on point as well great job Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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