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Hey @detroit8mile, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'πΎπΎπΎπMy B-Day Frestyle π―ππ»π'! π₯ We like the bars, well written! The rhyming is well put together. β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Dope flow on this mane but the recording quality could be a bit better fam! You def got what it takes so with a few changes you'll be next level! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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