What's up @cartermadecrucial,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Holla '! ๐ฅ
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work.
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Appreciate all the love my G'$ off top so
๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅ๐โค๏ธ@donachiri,๐#Life237 ๐๐๐๐ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
HOLLA โ๏ธ WAS WATING 4 THE RAP FLOW YA KNOW Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Holla at chu. LOL. Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Keep grinding you do better mad potential Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
holla holla holla holla atcha Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
What's up @cartermadecrucial, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Holla '! ๐ฅ This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
DOPE ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Nice g Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐๐ช๐๐ซก Bars: Good ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I love the beat Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
#imtd mean beat
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Chill vibes Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: On point ๐ฏ