yep how I feel too.... dope track man. mf feds pissing me off bad... I'm just me but they Fuck wit me like I'm level 9. hope they look me in the eyes on they next attempt. not catch me in my sleep in a cell using a tazer
Hi there @terry187,
Here's some feedback on your track 'SERIAL KILLER', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π
911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! π§¨
Solid mix, the recording quality is great! β
We really loved the alternative energy you brought on this one, we like that you didn't just stick to one structure and you constantly switched up the rhythm and dynamic of the track, both with beat switches and flow switches. The idea is great, you just gotta clean it up around the edges a lil bit for a more polished track!
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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yep how I feel too.... dope track man. mf feds pissing me off bad... I'm just me but they Fuck wit me like I'm level 9. hope they look me in the eyes on they next attempt. not catch me in my sleep in a cell using a tazer
Hi there @terry187, Here's some feedback on your track 'SERIAL KILLER', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 𧨠Solid mix, the recording quality is great! β We really loved the alternative energy you brought on this one, we like that you didn't just stick to one structure and you constantly switched up the rhythm and dynamic of the track, both with beat switches and flow switches. The idea is great, you just gotta clean it up around the edges a lil bit for a more polished track! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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