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Hi there @smokeyaday1,
Here's some feedback on your track 'bust it open', thank you for sharing with us! 💥
Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills.
Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track.
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hi there @smokeyaday1, Here's some feedback on your track 'bust it open', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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