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Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Last Chance'! π₯
Sick bars, keep 'em comin. π Amazing rhyme skills, you got serious poetry flowin'! Some bless ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π
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There does seem to be a lot of background noise on this one tho! Try recording in a more quiet place as your vocal sounds really good even with the background noise!
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
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What's up @jacqua, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Last Chance'! π₯ Sick bars, keep 'em comin. π Amazing rhyme skills, you got serious poetry flowin'! Some bless ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ The recording is solid, everything is clear. β There does seem to be a lot of background noise on this one tho! Try recording in a more quiet place as your vocal sounds really good even with the background noise! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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