Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @bluesheisty! Welcome to our feedback of 'She a hoe'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Can't hear your vocals too well on this one, make sure you're the right distance from your mic. Try to draw from personal experience when writin'. It'll give your bars a unique flavour. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bluesheisty

2 years ago

Busting rhymes making them chime, glock pop yo head like a dime. Slime slime bitch you sound 9 when you cry , me and gang like to stay high, hoes shooting at us to get high, we have a good time drinking the Hennessy, niggas be corresing me like methfetameans. Pocket full of ketamine you know the rest I mean. Now we cheating at a game of tennis. Bitch call my phone while I’m eating lettuce, I told that hoe to stay in the car, but instead she took it too far. Doing coke on a Tuesday. Yall play with them balls like it’s woo Wednesday. Shoe game is ok, spending checks everyday while we got moon rocks from outer space, bitch you gon retreat any day, while me and gang smoking bowls everyday. You can’t bust no rhymes bro looking at me like I’m a funny mime but he can’t get enough so he finna die. He gonna get shot that how we pay the price