Yo @donking,
It's time for us to take a look at 'moneyhungry$ - Whatup with it jack'! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶
Dope freestyle fam. Fell off in some places but it’s still a dope attempt. Keep rappin’! You’ll get better and better with time!
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @donking, It's time for us to take a look at 'moneyhungry$ - Whatup with it jack'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Dope freestyle fam. Fell off in some places but it’s still a dope attempt. Keep rappin’! You’ll get better and better with time! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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