Yo @jonathonfrisbie!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Memories'! ๐ฅ
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you!
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! ๐
Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio?
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Yo @jonathonfrisbie! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Memories'! ๐ฅ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐ We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! ๐ Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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AMAZING ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅsuper glad to hear this ๐ฅ๐ค I just released 4 new tracks for my new album keep in touch Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to ๐ ๐ #TmListenUpDevohn hope you enjoy ๐
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