RETHINK
Daddy pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you right there, Guard tried playing hero Daddy showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And children and there smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank. RETHINK
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Daddy pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you right there, Guard tried playing hero Daddy showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And children and there smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank. RETHINK
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HELLLL YEAH THANK YOU. I wanna find ways to improve my recording because it's a lil off but definitely practice will make me learn and process the flow better.
Hi @oldschxxl! Welcome to our feedback of 'RETHINK'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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