Hey @jonathonfrisbie,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Torn'! 💥
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life!
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Thank you! Yeah it was freestyle
Hey @jonathonfrisbie, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Torn'! 💥 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎