Hey @jrpqsspmk5,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'No way out (01:10:12)'! 💥
Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills.
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Good choice of beat! 🎼
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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#first time rapping tell me how it sound
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: On point 🎯
Hey @jrpqsspmk5, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'No way out (01:10:12)'! 💥 Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Good choice of beat! 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: On point 🎯