we're great
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•18 Mar 2022
ayo, boy watchu doin over there: Lil cupcake on da beat with ya boi Archie. Ya, I'm back I'm back I'm back I'm back I'm back I smash this beat one word at a time, y yo girl keep calling my line. You never heard of a line as perfect as mine, I'm young and fat so I can get away with crime. we in a rap challenge but that's okay, later their mums will he calling me babe. Even though I'm their mate, they beg on their knees singing "your great: I dont know what ur on, but I will pass it to Archie like a baton. Ha ha ha... talk to me, you want to hear somethin. My boi cupcake and me spitting bars. Sitting on the couch eating Mars bars. Yer u know that's who we are, australian born and bred horaaaaaa Bro fuck it ima go crazy. Just gonna stand there, but that's alright, c u just gonna stand their like yogi bear while im in the spotlight. Bitchhhh Me and cupcake on level four whilst Will and Luca are sitting on ground flow shit Henry end these foils. alright, alright alright alright. like Archie said these boys are fools, i will get these boys in the coliseum and call me a bull. We are hard on the beat unlike these boys, just sit down before I make u freeze in Andy's room like a toy. hahaha these kids they think they turf, the only thing u know is how to be an dumbass fuck. Smoke weed every day.
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Hi @henna.6968388! Welcome to our feedback of 'we're great'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You got great bars here. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
ayo, boy watchu doin over there: Lil cupcake on da beat with ya boi Archie. Ya, I'm back I'm back I'm back I'm back I'm back I smash this beat one word at a time, y yo girl keep calling my line. You never heard of a line as perfect as mine, I'm young and fat so I can get away with crime. we in a rap challenge but that's okay, later their mums will he calling me babe. Even though I'm their mate, they beg on their knees singing "your great: I dont know what ur on, but I will pass it to Archie like a baton. Ha ha ha... talk to me, you want to hear somethin. My boi cupcake and me spitting bars. Sitting on the couch eating Mars bars. Yer u know that's who we are, australian born and bred horaaaaaa Bro fuck it ima go crazy. Just gonna stand there, but that's alright, c u just gonna stand their like yogi bear while im in the spotlight. Bitchhhh Me and cupcake on level four whilst Will and Luca are sitting on ground flow shit Henry end these foils. alright, alright alright alright. like Archie said these boys are fools, i will get these boys in the coliseum and call me a bull. We are hard on the beat unlike these boys, just sit down before I make u freeze in Andy's room like a toy. hahaha these kids they think they turf, the only thing u know is how to be an dumbass fuck. Smoke weed every day.
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