Bars are good delivery gets better then further you get into the song, the addition audios decrease the grasp you have
Bars: Good ๐
Delivery: Can improve ๐
Impression: Can improve ๐
This was raining good I just wish you would flip up the flow a little more but I love that I can hear everything that youโre saying bars are on point
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Great ๐
Impression: Great ๐
What's up @jayjaylive,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Oldme '! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. โ Your vocals are real clear, keep doin' what your doin'! ๐ค
Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ
Dope track but would definitely work on makin the delivery a bit more flames fam. Would make the track pop out a bit more.
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Keep pushing fam Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Nice ๐
Bars are good delivery gets better then further you get into the song, the addition audios decrease the grasp you have Bars: Good ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
This was raining good I just wish you would flip up the flow a little more but I love that I can hear everything that youโre saying bars are on point Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
What's up @jayjaylive, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Oldme '! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. โ Your vocals are real clear, keep doin' what your doin'! ๐ค Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ Dope track but would definitely work on makin the delivery a bit more flames fam. Would make the track pop out a bit more. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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