What's up @greenrisky,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Better'! π₯
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track?
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Thanks, I promise I will do better
What's up @greenrisky, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Better'! π₯ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯