Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jynellcarter, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'lilnell'! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jynell Carter

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.