💯Lucky Day#23kingp🌍🌎🌏

CarieM

Author

4 years ago

its my first day out might be my lucky day in Kentucky chilling with my soulmate no longer irate when i look you i see a piece heaven my medcine baby you evelen fuck a ten i here to win might be born into sin but its not made us by god grace it was replace by the blood jesus he free us no we can live our lives cause i dont wont be no where if you anit there not even heaven ill go through hell cant you tell so sit back and relax let this track unwind while i stimiluate that mind........ its my first day out might be my lucky day in Kentucky chilling with my soulmate no longer irate when i look you i see a piece heaven baby you 11 fuck a ten i here to win might be born into sin but its not made us by god grace it was replace by the blood jesus he free us no we can live our lives cause i dont wont be no where if you anit there not even heaven i go through hell cant you tell so back and relax and let this track unwind while i stimiluate that mind........

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @makejesusfamous, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '💯Lucky Day#23kingp🌍🌎🌏'! 💥 You got great bars here. 🙌 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎